sexta-feira, setembro 03, 2010

My father on his sixteen years old , worked more tan me , he was healthier than me , shorter than me, fatter than me and more pacient. He was busier than me .
His colthes were better than mine , but they were ugly. He didn't get out of home until he got married ( with my mother ). The music were worse than today. He didn't go to many parties at 70's. The datings were more hidden than today's datings.
Nowadays, I work less than him . My colthes are worse than his colthes , but more beatiful than 37 years ago. Today's life is more stressful than he had and sicker than his times.

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    My father on his sixteen years old , (-)worked more tan me , he was (-) healthier than me , shorter than me, fatter than me and more pacient. He was busier than me .
    His colthes werw better than mine , but they were ugly. He didn't get out of home until he (GOT) married ( with my mother ). The music were worse than today. He didn't go to many parties at 70's. The datings were more hidden than today's datings.
    Nowadays, I (-) work less than him . My colthes are worse than his colthes , but more beatiful than 37 years ago. Today's life is more stressful than he had and sicker than his times.

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